honest
honest
Open.
. Broken.
. . . Wanting.
. . . . . Crying.
. . . . . . . Pleading (with no words)
. . . . . . . . . Reaching (with no gestures)
. . . . . . . . . . . Inhaling. Deeply. Exhaling. Barely.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . Holding the breath.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Holding her breath.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Holding her tongue –
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . tongue
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . breath
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . her
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . holding
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . barely exhaling
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . in deep
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . gestures, not without reaching…
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . words, not without pleading…
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . crying
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . wanting
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . broken
. . . . . . . . . . . . . open
. . . . . . . . . . . open
. . . . . . . . open
. . . . . .open
. . . . closed
.
honest
.
“I miss you,” she says.
“I miss you,” she said.
“I miss you,” she would have said.
“I miss you,” she might say.
.
If it ends.
When it ends.
If it ended.
If it happened at all.
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